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Re: Fiend Kingdom: Darkness Stirring
I hope that's better. Sorry about that, but I didn't stop to consider that.
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Lionheart: Prologue
I was just making sure it was good before I built off of it. Thanks for taking the time (however little time it took) to read it. It is fantasy, ...
Mar 15, 2008 -
Re: Getting Over
I'd feel bad if my crit was longer than your poem. Luckily, that's neigh impossible. Great poem, I felt it deep down. I bow to you (*bows*). Keep up the ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Don't go to prison
Dude, this is sick, in every sense of the word. Hilarious, witty, but completely random. Keep it up, it's just my kind of poem. I can't really crit a joke, ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: In A Lover's Eyes and a Lion's Den
Hahaha, yeah I placed it wrong. N00b's mistake won't happen again. It was late and I jsut had to get it out. Thanks for the crits, I appreciate it.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Don't let me fall
I loved it, really. I'd love to hear that some time. Solid all around, but I'm no expert I hate to say. Keep it up, can't wait to read more.
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Dogs of War - Tomorrow
I liked it. Yeah, every band needs a whiny song, but this one was good. But what do I know I listen to The Police.
Feb 27, 2008